CHANNILLO


Commented on The Extra-Terrestrial Toilet:
   "Thanks so much for reading! My hope was that somebody out there would get my humor. Appreciate the interest! Best, RDF"
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5 years ago

Commented on Waiting:
   "Loved "under the lanterns whispered your name like a mantra" and the alliteration of "sultry sirens""
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7 years ago

Commented on Waiting:
   "Raw and intense...good stuff!!"
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7 years ago

Commented on Lot 149:
   "Still intrigued by the mysteries of this creepy old farmhouse..."
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7 years ago

Commented on Waiting:
   ""Give and Take" is my favorite - lines like "spit the knives through my veins" are very powerful. Nice work Kerriann, David"
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7 years ago

Commented on "Adrift":
   "Hi Holly, Adrift just keeps getting better! The imagery of the island makes me feel as though I was born and raised there, but of course I wasn't! Looking forward to the next chapter, David"
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7 years ago

Commented on Tales From Midhgardhur:
   "Colin I really enjoyed Chapter 27 "Remember" - the "memory mold" is brilliant! Keep up the great writing, David"
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7 years ago

Commented on Vlad the Conqueror:
   "Thanks again for your interest and readership Holly! Vlad is just that - a bad dude with a soft side, or at least that's what I'm trying to achieve with the character. The early chapters focus more on his father Lord Tepes so I need to get back to Vlad! Also let me know what you think of Mina! Best David"
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7 years ago

Commented on Waiting:
   "You're welcome Kerriann! Looking forward to reading and commenting some more as I'm able. David"
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7 years ago

Commented on "Adrift":
   "Hi Holly, You've inspired me also, and I look forward to the sequel. Thanks for writing back and for reading my series! David"
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7 years ago

Commented on Waiting:
   "Started with the last poem first "Tides" and really felt the intimacy that is inspired by the Sea - nice work and I'll keep reading! Thanks, David"
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7 years ago

Commented on Lot 149:
   "Hey Liz, Enjoyed Chapter 1 - the characters Keira and Tad really come to life (and yeah Zues too!) Can't wait to read the rest. Thanks, David"
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7 years ago

Commented on "Adrift":
   "Hi Holly, Great stuff! You have a gift for hooking the reader in early - Chapter 1 only and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work! David"
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7 years ago